Slums are a living hell for the so called ‘Slum Residents’. The people and animals living here hate it but they have no other choice s thats why they are forced to live in such horrible conditions. It is a living hell with no water. The water that they are forced to drink, is so dirty, that it is surage like water. government help is not known to the people that live in the slums because the government does not care about them. The people living here have to struggle to survive everyday because where they live, it is not a human sanitary condition.

The people in the residents have no clean water. The water they drink is not even healthy for animals! The people are forced to drink it with the thought that it is the only thing they will ever know. A lot of humans die each year due to dirty drinking water that enter their immune system. The water can really effect the human body, due to the fact that some places with no water filtering can have bacteria and can cause a disease in the body that lead to death.

The government system is usually in the Democratic or Republican system. Both parties are where the money is and this is why the government does not help people living in the slums. If the government helped people living in the slums and in poverty, there would not be any people living n the slums or in poverty. The government branch has so much money and for them not to help the poor and the needy does not seem right. Those with money and capacity to help should and make a difference.

The conditions that people and animals live in in the slums are not sanitary conditions. The water is sourage water like! The house they live in are really compacted and between 15-20 people live in a 15x15 home. Their house are made out of card board or cheap aluminum.

Slums are a living hell for the so called ‘Slum Residents’. It is a living hell with no water, government help, or human sanitary living conditions.
Slums are a living hell for the so called ‘Slum Residents’. The people and animals living here hate it but they have no other choice s thats why they are forced to live in such horrible conditions. It is a living hell with no water. The water that they are forced to drink, is so dirty, that it is surage like water. government help is not known to the people that live in the slums because the government does not care about them. The people living here have to struggle to survive everyday because where they live, it is not a human sanitary condition.

INTRODUCTION

 The slums are very dirty, crowded, and people in their get no help from the government and they really do not care what happens or is going on with the people that live in the slums. The reason that the people are living in slums is because they cannot get any good jobs or any jobs at all! There is so many people living like this and nobody even cares about what is going on with them or how they're even living! 

THESIS

Slums are a very dirty place to live in because there is no clean places in slums. The water is very dirty, it is sourage like water. People who live in slums are forced to drink this type of water because this is the only water they have access too. If you would live in a slum you would be living in a small shack that would surrounded and crowded by hundreds of other shacks around yours. Also, You would have between 10-20 other people living in the same shack as you.

I.INTRODUCTION
a. Slums are a very bad place to live in because it is a very dirty environment full of trash and the houses aren't built correctly they are really bad constructed.
b. Slums are a really harsh environment to live in, it is a very poor place  
c. Slums have a negative effect because they are very poor and it is just thrown there

II. DEFENDABLE PONT 1
a.  Slums are hell
b. Support Evidence
i: quote
ii: paraphrase
c.Explanation
d. Transition

III. DEFENDABLE POINT 2
a. Slums are so dirty and un healthy
b. Supporting evidence
i: Quote
ii. Paraphrase

VI. DEFENDABLE POINT 3
a. Finally slums are also full of diseases that spread really fast and then everyone gets it.
b. Supporting Evidence
c. Explanation
d. Transition to conclusion

V. Conclusions
a. hook
b. Slums are  a negative effect in the world because they have poor living and housing and it is very dirty and full of diseases it is a very hard life. No one would want to live there 
c. Summarize Arguments
d. leave the reader with the same thing to question about.

THESIS

Living in slums is like hell. It is very dirty, crowded, and the government provides no support for us people that are living in the slums around the world.